Hello,
After much fussing and late-night hand-wringing, I've managed to get
together a fairly thorough draft of the content for the new
bricolagecms.org web site. So, if you're inclined to help, and copy is
your thing, please feel free to read, review, edit, comment, and
generally improve things via this Google Doc: http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AQZzmiG9MvT4ZGRmeDNnM25fOTNjYmZ0YjlmaA&hl=en
(If you don't have, or don't want, a Google account, you can view the
document here: http://docs.google.com/View?id=ddfx3g3n_93cbftb9fh )
Here are some of the things that guided the draft, perhaps they'll
help you in helping to improve the copy:
* Tried to pull together the best pieces of copy from the old site
* Tried to keep things as simple and minimal as possible for a roughly
six-page site
* Tried to speak to IT decisions makers and programmers vs. folks
looking for off-the-shelf CMS and blogging software
* Tried to give the "voice" some personality
Again, here's the link: http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AQZzmiG9MvT4ZGRmeDNnM25fOTNjYmZ0YjlmaA&hl=en
If you only have 15 minutes, just a proof read for minor typos and so
on would be great. If you have longer, please feel free to get
editing. :-)
Many thanks in advance,
Phillip.
Previous threads:
http://www.gossamer-threads.com/lists/bricolage/devel/37752
http://www.gossamer-threads.com/lists/bricolage/devel/37969
http://www.gossamer-threads.com/lists/bricolage/devel/38012
--
Phillip Smith // Simplifier of Technology // COMMUNITY BANDWIDTH
www.communitybandwidth.ca // www.phillipadsmith.com
After much fussing and late-night hand-wringing, I've managed to get
together a fairly thorough draft of the content for the new
bricolagecms.org web site. So, if you're inclined to help, and copy is
your thing, please feel free to read, review, edit, comment, and
generally improve things via this Google Doc: http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AQZzmiG9MvT4ZGRmeDNnM25fOTNjYmZ0YjlmaA&hl=en
(If you don't have, or don't want, a Google account, you can view the
document here: http://docs.google.com/View?id=ddfx3g3n_93cbftb9fh )
Here are some of the things that guided the draft, perhaps they'll
help you in helping to improve the copy:
* Tried to pull together the best pieces of copy from the old site
* Tried to keep things as simple and minimal as possible for a roughly
six-page site
* Tried to speak to IT decisions makers and programmers vs. folks
looking for off-the-shelf CMS and blogging software
* Tried to give the "voice" some personality
Again, here's the link: http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AQZzmiG9MvT4ZGRmeDNnM25fOTNjYmZ0YjlmaA&hl=en
If you only have 15 minutes, just a proof read for minor typos and so
on would be great. If you have longer, please feel free to get
editing. :-)
Many thanks in advance,
Phillip.
Previous threads:
http://www.gossamer-threads.com/lists/bricolage/devel/37752
http://www.gossamer-threads.com/lists/bricolage/devel/37969
http://www.gossamer-threads.com/lists/bricolage/devel/38012
--
Phillip Smith // Simplifier of Technology // COMMUNITY BANDWIDTH
www.communitybandwidth.ca // www.phillipadsmith.com