At the very least this one below. I think the whole first sentence (or
attempt at rather) needs rewording. I believe correct english wold be
";therefore"
I best guess is split it to at least 2 sentences, but not quite sure what
wording would be good.
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/home/philip/Developement/src/modperl-docs/src/outstanding rv=1 45 >cvs diff
-u sites.html
Index: sites.html
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RCS file: /home/cvspublic/modperl-docs/src/outstanding/sites.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -u -r1.13 sites.html
--- sites.html 5 Dec 2002 02:37:54 -0000 1.13
+++ sites.html 4 Mar 2003 05:25:19 -0000
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
<p>
Also remember that many services are using mod_perl as their
back-end, therefore these aren't reported by Netcraft, since the
-back-ends are usually cannot be accessed by the Netcraft scanner. For
+back-ends usually cannot be accessed by the Netcraft scanner. For
the same reason, if you try to verify whether some of the services
listed here are running mod_perl, you may not be able to, because the
back-end is not accessible. The listing is made of reports from people
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attempt at rather) needs rewording. I believe correct english wold be
";therefore"
I best guess is split it to at least 2 sentences, but not quite sure what
wording would be good.
[ttyp5] philip@p6m7g8.com
/home/philip/Developement/src/modperl-docs/src/outstanding rv=1 45 >cvs diff
-u sites.html
Index: sites.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/cvspublic/modperl-docs/src/outstanding/sites.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -u -r1.13 sites.html
--- sites.html 5 Dec 2002 02:37:54 -0000 1.13
+++ sites.html 4 Mar 2003 05:25:19 -0000
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
<p>
Also remember that many services are using mod_perl as their
back-end, therefore these aren't reported by Netcraft, since the
-back-ends are usually cannot be accessed by the Netcraft scanner. For
+back-ends usually cannot be accessed by the Netcraft scanner. For
the same reason, if you try to verify whether some of the services
listed here are running mod_perl, you may not be able to, because the
back-end is not accessible. The listing is made of reports from people
END
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